As far as I know, all authors – published or no – have some aspect of the writing process that is just absolutely foreign to them. Something that, though they have learned over the years how to put together a coherent story, continues to elude them. (I’m not talking about beginnings, or middles, or ends. They are all evil and everyone already knows that.)
For some people, they can’t figure out how to have their dialogue flow more naturally. Some cannot figure out how to vary their sentence length and structure for the most impact. Yet others get so tied up in their subplots that they never find their way out.
Mine? Description.
This is really my own fault. As a reader, my eyes glaze over when I get to descriptive passages. A few words or maybe a sentence slipped into a paragraph, fine, but anything more than that and I’m off in search of the next line of dialogue. So as a writer, my description is understandably a bit sparse (though, hopefully, it is fully integrated and doesn’t read like “Oops, Kit realized she should put some description in here”). This isn’t necessarily a bad thing – Hemingway, after all, is not known for his brilliant, picturesque sunsets – except that I write, for the most part, fantasy and science fiction. So there needs to be a certain level of description to help my readers picture new species and worlds and so forth, and I am just not sure I’m getting there, though I am trying.
Anyone have any recommendations for improving my descriptive skills (that doesn’t include “sit down and describe everything in the room in great detail” because that really just makes me want to gnaw off my own leg and escape. I’ve never understood how that is at all helpful for integrating description into a story)? What’s your stumbling block?